gOOD GOOD I LIKE IT

Very dark, me like it.

Hey, it's a really good poem.
Excellenly written and dark. :)

-ami

Damm good poem

Short, sweet, and to the point. Not many care to do this cuz they think that it will have meant nothing to those that read it. You pulled it off nicely. Good poem indeed. Now I'll just ask that u would review one of my poems if ya get the time, I would greatly appreciate it.

I like the feeling of this. It's like a dark love poem... at least that's what I got out of it. It's really unique. I love it. Nice job on your rhyming. Most people get so hung up on the rhyming that they fail to display a good message, but you didn't. Excellent job.