Wow very powerful poem. I believed that you put your whole heart into this poem. This is an amazing piece of work. I'm very impressed. Keep up the good work.

Although you write about things many contemporary poets do, you put them in a different perspective.

Nice. But what else did I expect from a writer such as yourself? By the way, this is...PixieWhitefeather, trying her hand at original junk.

oh, that makes me wanna cry

*cries*

I love it. I can relate to it very well.

::sniffle:: umm how about letting one carefully choosen person in on your feelings?

wow. thats really good. i can seriously relate! good job! sorry, i suck at reviews!

me

i luv dis poem. it's so sad. and... well, i cant realli xplain it. v. gud work, plz continue!

Very powerfull.

This made me cry.

I feel this way so often it's not funny.

Great job.

Dani W.

}the blue haired freak{