major advice: you cant just... rearrange what you said before and call it a poem

i think... ive really gotten the deeper meaning in this...

i want to die while i smile yet lie...or something like that

incredibly immature... and bad. it was bad.

I don't know if I get this poem, but I like it. Somehow, I think it fits me.

Confusing but in a good way. I like the contrast to this one. Keep it up.

CT

wow...that was a cool comparison

nice word play

Confusing.. never read a poem with this contast in it. But me like.

Heh, confusingly brilliant work...

Yes, that is true. I hate lies so much, but I have to lie all the time. Kind of ironic isn't it?

yes. that is true. and I can't think of anything coherant to say right now...so well done and I'll leave it at that.

O_o

cool, i like this! short and simple, nicely put. good job! keep on writing!

Kinda of confusing, but really, what are poems for? I get the deeper meaning to this. (Of course, I'm not telling you what that is. _) Great job. Short and sweet. I liked it.

Oh, interesting take... I liked the contrast this piece held.

Jade