Wow. Dark and interesting. Please continue =)

Wow. Stunning beginning, if I do say so myself. Please continue.

Vert good. Very good indeed. I'm looking forward to the rest if this is only the prologue.
Very detailed too. Good work.

Wow, this is very impressive. You describe everything so beautifully, and the dialogue is powerful without being overwhelming. The only things that bothered me were a few minor typos and spelling mistakes, but those can easily be changed.
This is a very promising beginning, and I hope to read more soon!