I gotta have another story. That was awesome

Fabulous, Amazing, Excellent. You ended this well, you developed this well, overall this story was fabulous and quite creative! I can't wait for you to write something else...!
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Ashley

Oh a cliffhanger! You can't leave me stranded! I want to find out what happens next! Update SOON!
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Ashley

Great job! I'm soo happy you updated this...next chap... !
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Ashley

more please! i'm curious to see how the relationship between Kali and Artemis plays out as the friends plot against them both.

Awesome story. You're a great storyteller and you have the ability to get someone hooked after only one chapter.
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You haven't updated this story in a very very very long time so I hope that you do decide to update soon!
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Great job!
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Ashley

Awesome chapter.. Artemis is so MEAN.. hah but syhe's a vamp, that describes it!
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Ashley

There's a witch named ASHLEY.. hah I like her...
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Ashley

Kali is BACK!
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next
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Ashley

ARTEMIS AT SCHOOL!? LOL It's seems really starnge to me, I can't wait to find out how that turns out...
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Ashley

HAH.. they're going to Florida!
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next...
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Ashley

Wow, artemis kicked Donavon's **! hah. That was seriously a good fight!
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Ashley

Great chapter
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next..lol
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ashley

Wow, I usually don't like vampire stories but this is quite original and very good
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next chapter...
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Ashley

Awesome start, you definitely have me intrigued. Next chapter...
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Ashley