At first I thought it might have been one of those humor stories with body switches involved.
Boy, was I wrong.
I loved the depth of the story and I am definitely captivated by the story.
Amazing =)

Great story. :]
Very interesting concept and told well. (Y)

Very cute and sweet and nicely-written. I would have liked to know more about Calvin and Raine's relationship. I had a little bit of trouble picturing how they interact, mostly on Calvin's part. But, since I don't suppose you're coming back to revise this, I'll just say, a very enjoyable read throughout. Thanks!

Interesting...I've been think of a body-switching slash story myself...

To hell with normal, this is a wonderful story! was absolutly THRILLED I came across this! everyone that reads slash should read this at least once! (i might have liked to see a touch more of Sven, or the prom, but to hell with it...just glad for the happy ending)

p.s. ever try writing a review when your pinky/ringfinger on your left hand are numb? it's odd...0.o

~Moon's Tears

cool story! i really liked it!

: )

DH

really cute ending =) loved the story!

That's it? Wow. Seemed like there was some major plot to come still.. Interesting take but too hard to get involved in because of the character changes and situation changes really.

Sorry to quote alot but - "When our parents came back out, I had asked for me. I mean, Raine had asked for herself. Or something. My body had asked for her body to enter the damn room! Whatever. I went, of course. Scottie frowned, but I didn't think about that until later, when it crossed my mind that 'I' had apparently wanted to see a friend before my brother. Ouch." - that was really confusing. Sometimes you refer to Raine as he and then explain what you mean. It'd be alot less confusing if it the normal names were used - nevermind the body. Anyway. I like the idea about finding out another side to the best friend like which she has the 'slave' accompanyment etc.

definatly cute! the relationships between the three main characters are definatly well done, and i like how you downplayed Zach's roll in all of this until it actually mattered

very nice. i like calvins character. and i like happy endings too! yeah! you write nicely. though i would be most happy if you updated Beyond friends... i was so curious to know what was going to happen... oh well... keep^up the good work!

Awesome sauce. This story is really weird, but totally worth it.
~Sasa

heh. =D

hm... is he going back to his body now?

heh. ^_^