 Fleeting Moment 2008-04-05 . chapter 9THAT WAS AWSOME! |
 HeatherLee 2008-02-10 . chapter 9that story was ABSOLUTELY adorable! i loved every second of it! im so glad you didnt kill Alex (i was beginning to wonder if you were a writing serial killer...). my only suggestion would be to drag out those three months were Nick was in charge of the pack. if you did that then it would seem so much better when Alex comes back and the pack is all reunited. just a thought...i dont know i you are into changing old stories around or not...anyway like i said i love love loved this story and i cant wait to read more of your stories!! awesome job! |
 Mae Liz 2005-11-12 . chapter 9That's cute! It was sad that Nick had control for three months though, but at least she stayed true to Alex! And to think that a year ago she 'hated' Ale and thought that he was an 'arrogant jerk'! |
 ItalianQT 2004-10-14 . chapter 9Great story!! I thought you did an excellent job on this story! : ) |
 Sh'arra Rie 2004-04-11 . chapter 5Ok some constructive critisisom... When Anya fught she got hurt and had to be cared home but then she walked home with Alex. How did she do that?
Sh'arra |
 Hellbabi 2003-09-17 . chapter 9Wlecome to the Talk Show Hour..With us we have Hellbabi...How are you this evening?
**Genki desu, arigatou.**
Oh you spk Japanese, ne? let's stay w/ english,k?
**sure**
So tell us, Did you like the story "CHOICES"?
**well of course. I did. Why wouldn't I? It was like a short story and I love those the best but then again I love novels to. I like to take my time and jsut marinate on the characters.**
Really? Tell me now, hellbabi, don't you think the story just went to quick?
**oh god no. It was just fine. Like I said earlier it was a short story and short it was (snickers)**
(announcer nods then smiles) Well hellbabi, that's al we wanted to know...Go ahead and continue reading and I Will C U next story.
**cool. C Ya melissarxy1**
Take it easy ^_^ |
 MiniMichelle2 2003-05-26 . chapter 9::squeels:: hehehe I love this one :-D |
 Sublimegrl03 2003-05-21 . chapter 9This was a really good story. I liked it alot. I liked the plot. Write more i wanna know what happens afterwards. |
 Lady Arabian Knight 2003-05-16 . chapter 9I love this story!! Wish it was longer thought! But I love it reguardless!! |
 lil_sunandstars 2003-04-23 . chapter 9 This was a very interesting story and I liked it very much. It had a little bit of everything. Your use of First person narrative was good and your conversation sections were well written. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes,but those can be fixed if you wanted to. Very well done. |
 Static Wolf 2003-04-19 . chapter 9 GREAT STORY! You have to write another wolf one this one was so awesome!! I hope to read more of your stories soon!! but right now i must do the laundry altough i wish it could do it itself! hehe ^_^
~Static Wolf |
 jessica 2003-04-19 . chapter 7 Okay don't leave me hangin this story has gottin better and better oh my goodness i can't beleive he actually think's he's going to have anya, I mean please. Up date soon please! |
 Static Wolf 2003-04-17 . chapter 7 Oh no not another cliffhanger!! Please update soon!! I really LOVE this story and I get inspiration from your writing and your other stories. I read your story Nightshade and that is funny i had a story like that but i haven't posted I have a wolf on e that they are in a band, I have'nt finished either story, couldn't find inspiration but i found it... I am going to stop rambling and i think i am going to go write right now!! Keep on writing!! ^_^
~Static Wolf |
 Lisa 2003-04-17 . chapter 7 i LOVE THIS STORY! continue continue coninue soon please! |
 Fire Raven 2003-04-16 . chapter 3 I LOVE YOUR STORY! oh it is so awesome! write more fast! dude when Justin died it was just like woah. I really love your stories though and you write very well. I'm planning to read all of yours. update soon!! |