Hehee. Funny! ^_^

OK, I kinda like it.

WOAH...This speaks to me...

*The Mighty Sisto*

greatest piece of work ive ever read! I almost shead a tear when jolyn said "was it me, eating a monegoose pie?" great work proud of ya!

Hey, I'm sorry if my last review was dfksdfl;ksdl;f. I felt bad when you signed off. I'm sorry if I said the wrong thing :(

HEHE. I was the first to see it :D It is funny. Pretty good, but I don't think it's the quality people will be looking at, it's the humor. It is creative and humorous! Nicely written.