um i'm not sure i understand something. the reflection is actually her right? wouldn't that make this a small bit of slash? i'm not sure since i don't read nor write slash but i was just wonder if it had a tiny bit of that in it.

My first reaction was uneasiness. And discomfort... I have no idea, it's just that... the overall image of it... it's the part where the reflection opened its mouth that made me uneasy.

But overall, very good. I'll be honest and say that I like The Answering Machine better still ;)

...am now having a strange wish to have you write happy stories... hmm. I should spare some time and read all the other ones you have... haven't maneged to do so.