This was psychotic in the best way possible.

Woah! Awesome, but I wasn't expecting it. Great job, though. Dark and cool. Ever read "A Rose for Emily?" Reminds me of that.

A good, well written story. I enjoyed the twist at the end. It wasn't a surprising twist, but I still enjoyed how it unfolded and led up to it. It's not easy making a very short piece or work interesting, but I enjoyed that. Well done.

Nice writing style. Creepy ending. Lovely word choice. Creepy ending!
Very easy read. Creepy ending!

I liked it, in case you didn't notice!

Oh my... Another winner! Creepy winner, but good winner. Man, the ending gave us the shivers! Creepy, creepy, creepy! *shivers* Yes...

More, more! Scare us again, scare us again! *nods of agreement* Elegant trama. Yepper. Write more soon!

~The Asylum Escapees~

OMG! HOLY **! I'm half in tears freaked out! not alot of stories can do that to me! You should be proud! THAT IS SO ** SAD! "It's good to know you can never run away."? A perfect finishing touch! This is alot like what I write. Hey I'll make sure to look up some more of ut stuff

aw! thats so sweet and distubing! thank you for writing that!

Good, but creepy. Quite well- written.