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| Greyfox Cowgirl 2004-06-12 ch 2,  | abuseThat was fun to read. I like it! You should definatly write more! |
| mysticvysgiyi 2003-04-09 ch 2, | abuseHey, I thought it was really good, and I think you need to get "your lazy butt" to start working on the next chapter. I enjoyed it, and I liked the Spanish you put in there. I'm part Spainish, and it's nice yo read a bit of mythology with it in there, but I thought, the it was mi'ja or mi hija, and it was hola? Could be wrong, but your meanings are correct, I know that much, but it also depends on where you live, 'cause of the dialect. For ex: sucio traditionally means dirty, but I was allways told to say ronas to say dirty. If you got any of that, well, good, but if you didn't, well, i'll just blame my evil twin, and just say it was good and you should definately write more. |
| Kerrigan-Kauket 2003-04-07 ch 2, | abusei give it two tumbs up |
| Kerrigan-Kauket 2003-04-07 ch 1, | abusethis is going to be good |