lovely! fantastic! u are a wonderful writer! ]

i absolutely love ur story. i wish there was more bout dri and shane in the end tho

Hihi i like this story a lot, it's a short but sweet fantasy story, a little short in depth compared to the usual trilogies but then u probably know that XD

I like Shane a lot but its kinda sad that Gadel went mad (

Good work!

yay! great job.

Sad to say that after he grew up I never warmed up to Shane's character again. Ah well, it was still a pretty good story, thanks for posting your writing. I look forward to reading more of your works.

wow. amazing story! incredible!

i have now read and reread this story five times. that is saying a lot, i only read most storys once. To Save a Kingdom is really good!

AW.. i really liked it. i feel bad for gadel though. even though i knew fro the start that shane and drianna were right for each other.. although i had my doubts about gadel.

ah! I am so happy that she is not staying with Gadel... he is too mean while drunk.

Oh, very nice! I denfinately can't wait to read more :O)

Awesome story. Simply, awesome. :)

Beautifully written and constructed, especially the pacing. Two rewrites huh? I kind of regret not having found this earlier and read your first two versions as well. I think it might have been fun. This one at least is a wonderful rendition of an epic tale. Too bad you never did write that other story or any other for this site, but great job with this one and best of luck!

Aww... that was a beautiful story. I love these middle ages type stories. Wonderfully written. The ending nearly made me cry! Amazing job.

This is really good! I finally finished after reading for an hour and a half! But it's all worth it. I really like this story...I wish Galden could find his happiness...you should totally make a sequel! About Shane the second and his love! ]

OMG! I like it already! Its realy god!