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Good story.

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All I can say is... wow! I loved this story and was unable to "put it down," so to speak, untill I had finnished it.

Absolutely brilliant.

*sniffle* why? why? why is it DriShane?...poor Gadel...*sniffle*

wow i love your story. you should get it published or somethingD

keep it up

SWEETNESS! AWESOME STORY! IM SPEECHLESS!

KEEP IMAGINING! KEEP CREATING! KEEP WRITING!

AMINA L.

ps- i mean it keep writing. this was a awesome story.

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that was a good chapter, even though you said it was action. i liked it. Gadel! YES! hes back. poor, poor gadel. well, toodles. i probably wont review until the end now- im WAY too into this story.

is to save a kingdom the new one? cause it's pretty good. To love another could be cool... but i like this one better.

must... keep... reading... sry for the short review.

Amina L. Forest

i hate thinking of titles of stories! i hate giving things away! so i made up a language and thats my title to my new story - ayorian fa lora aubrynn. or it could be ayorian fa lorarikinu. which one d'you like better? they both basically mean aubrynn, ruler of ayorian/princess of ayorian. actually.. i dunno which i like better.

wow! im really off topic. and i really wanna read more. yeah, we all new gadel was finished. i cried, but now im over it. see, though? she couldve told him earlier that id never work, when he was nice, so he could be all... okay then, whatever you say. and then never see eachother again. the end.

LANGUAGE WAS INVENtED FOR A REASON!

kay, so im pissed off. the scene i was looking foreward to the most was messed up cause he wasnt gadel version 1.5 anymore. :( now he's 2.0 lol.

uhh.. keep writing, imagining, creating

Amina L.

ps- sry i scrambled that, i just wanna read more though.

And there was me thinking chapter 24 was the last. maybe it is. i dunno.

great story update now bitch. jk. i love you too much. jk again. yeah. okay. wierd mood...

ohh.. gadel... must... keep... reading... see ya soon!

well, my gadel flag is burnt to crisp right now, along with his ship. of course, she cant just be all "ive moved on" to him. i mean, he did love her. he deserves to know the truth. hell, he deserved so much better then to be picked up and dropped by dri. especially since he didnt even know it wouldnt be forever. dri did, in the back of her mind. she so shouldve told him a long time ago. evil little...

dri and shane are so cute though! ah! of course shes gonna say yes. i want her to say yes (i think) i mean, she still should tell gadel, but... kay, ill shut up about gadel.

my favorite part would be... i dunno. my least favorite part is when theyre riding back to the castlein the elf place. nothing really happened. it was still good though :) and my favorite part would be when she tells gadel that shes a princess! yea! is of course that happened awhile ago. okay, okay. favorite part... its all so wonderful. ill try to get back to you on that, though.

Keep imagining. Keep creating. Keep writing.

Amina L.

were great with the reviewing cause youre great with the writing. but right now, i just wanna read more.

so all that jazz. byers for now.

wow. gypsies. wow. interesting. youre starting to scare me, person!

i'd be interesting if you left the old versions up (just to see how the changed)ohh... i wish id found this story sooner!

Keep it up and all that jazz.

Amina L.