|Reviews for To Save a Kingdom|
| The Green Crow 8/29/06 . chapter 12
Aw... what about... dri and... gadel! or shane! they're both good. I still think she shouldve told gadel like, right before she left. she couldve been like "yo, im the princess of your enemy country" and he could be like "ohmygawd" and stare at the empty space where she was because she was already out the door. Then he could write to her :)
Shane's cool too though. A bit cold at times... the time they spent apart changed him. Meh.
My prediction was right! But she didnt really do what i wanted her to do. Actually, she can save her bloody kingdom, I JUST WANT HER TO TELL GADEL! so he can stalk her- or not. your story :)
Keep imagining. Keep creating. Keep writing.
| The Green Crow 8/29/06 . chapter 11
That was a good chapter, once again. He's a drunk now, can't she see. i guess some people dont want to see the bad in other people. too bad. poor her :(. I hope she chooses... god, i have no idea what i want her to choose. I think she'll choose her kingdom. But i dunno... if I was in her position, I'd choose the guy.
Oh, I did make it to my tae-kwon-do class, and wasn't late! I roller-bladed like evil soldiers from a diffrent country were after me :) and trying to make me a slave :)
Keep imagining. Keep creating. Keep writing.
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 10
im the proest of the pro. uh... i havent lefrt yet. ill probably be late, but i managed to squeeze another chapter in. yay for me!
its a great story. buy for real. g2g NOW!
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 9
sweet. thisll probably be my last chappie tonight. i wish i could review you good, but... toodles for now.
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 8
uh... again, same old, same old. dont worry, ill give you a proper review eventually. school is stupid. see if i can squeeze one more chappie in, huh?
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 7
because im lazy and really, really running out of time, ill just say this- its wonderful and keep it up.
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 6
Gadel- definate hottie. think brad pitt(but not now, when he was actually young. thelma louise... yum) anyways, i cant wait to read more, i have to leave basically right away, so ill cut this review off short.
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 5
"Because that’s not safe to use around here! Who knows what they’d do to you if they knew you had the Power. Promise me you won’t use it again."
"I promise," I said reluctantly.
that just sounds kind of awkward. maybe its just me.
ooh... the princess loves her master! well... that sounds rather... od... well, i cant wait to keep reading. youre doing wonderful jobs with your characters. i especially love the last part, where theyre talking about royalty... and he doesnt know shes one! oh... i cant wait until he finds out! wow im hyper. reading good stories do that to me.
keep imagining. keep creating. keep writing.
Amina. L. Forest.
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 4
sry I couldnt review the last chapter, something about server overload. i really liked... your style of writing. it's really good. Uh... not much i didn,t like in this chapter, it was all really well done. It wasnt the most realistic auction ive ever read, but it was really good nonetheless. one thing though- you might want to change the description for the story- the whole time now ive been waiting for her too fall in love more then actually reading the story. i love your writing style because you tell it how it is, but thats not something you should really do in summaries. dont give so much away.
aah- the suspense is killing me! Toodles!
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 2
wow! i was right! That was really good! im only sorry i didnt start reading this early- i have to leave soon. :(. anyways, great job.
| The Green Crow 8/28/06 . chapter 1
Wow- this looks like it'll be interesting.
| rubyred7 8/13/06 . chapter 24
loved it, one of my favourite stories on this site.
| verify-me22 7/25/06 . chapter 24
I enjoyed this , i wanted so badly for it to be Gadel and Drianna. If anything, i felt Drianna treated him badly and should never have gotten involved with him. I didn't really like Shane, but hey the story was still writing! :)
| kurara3 7/18/06 . chapter 24
Hey,sorry I didn't review earlier but I was so caught up in reading I didn't want to stop. wow that was so good. keep up the good work!kurara3 _
| rollwithit 7/12/06 . chapter 23
aww this story was so good! a tragic end for gadel though, but im glad shane and dri had their happy ending.