|Reviews for To Save a Kingdom|
| Estelle Stafford 4/17/03 . chapter 4
Oh my, I feel sorry for her. Will she ever see Shane again?
| S. Breland 4/16/03 . chapter 5
That's really good.
I'm bad at writing in first person. I try, but I have little skill for it, unless it's a narrative or parody on my life. Or something like that.
Seriously, I think that Havara (lol, forgot her real name already...) should marry someone from insert name of country at war here and sort of forge a new alliance or something? I dunno, I'm just musing. Ignore me. :-D
You're a fantastic writer!
| vintagepostcard 4/16/03 . chapter 5
I love the plot! This is awesome!
| Weathered 4/16/03 . chapter 5
Still good! Update soon
| Ms Urania 4/15/03 . chapter 4
I like this so far. It flows well and I'm interested in what will happen to Havara next. However, you have a few spelling mistakes which distract from the story. Besides that good work!
| Sweetvenom1 4/15/03 . chapter 4
I love this story and I hope that you will update it soon. Havara is a good character, but she seems too neutral about her enslavement. she doesn't really struggle but she doesn't really accept it. but other than that everything is great.
| Weathered 4/10/03 . chapter 3
Yay, you updated! *grin* I like your writing style, good description, and your characters are believable. Update soon!
| shapeshifterchik13 4/9/03 . chapter 3
This is such a good story! You have to up date soon, I can't believe how fast I got hooked on it!
| Weathered 4/7/03 . chapter 2
This is good! Update soon I wanna know what happens. This is a very interesting start.