Well, it sounded interesting at first, but when I actually opened up to the essay - well, the formatting is a bit difficult to read. I think it is probably a good essay, and I will try to read it - but you should try to fix that up if you can. Just a friendly suggestion!

Also, I know it's none of my business, but I noticed that you don't accept anonymous reviews. You might want to change that as well, as some people aren't registered and others are too lazy to sign in - that way you will get more reviews.

Aragorn Elessar

You know, at first I was going to launch into my usual moan about paragraph spacing. But in this particular case, it seems to work better all run together, giving a sort of "stream of conciousness" effect.

The really weird thing is that a little bit at the end, "making me wait for them but still they didn't show up", brought to mind an image from just last Sunday. It will make no sense if you don't know about F1 motor racing, but I'll say it anyway. The image I thought of was of Giancarlo Fisichella standing around listlessly waiting for the official confirmation that he'd won the race. Which never came.