Reviews for Warrior Mage Princess Eldana

Reviews For: Warrior Mage Princess Eldana - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

Written 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abusepatricia wrede made my childhood worth it. random note. this story is hilarious so far. I will continue reading when it's not 4 in the morning. D: I NEED TO SLEEP. Very well done, though.
Frightfully Unaware 2007-02-01 ch 14,	abuseLove the story! You should update soon!
whohasthezebra 2006-01-18 ch 14,	abuseOk. Finally got back onto this site...The TM's were a little overdone, but you cleaned that up in this chapter, nice to see. I didn't notice till you pointed out, but short hair does go with a dragon better than a Pegasus!Argilagili's name sounds like a mystic seaweed from medieval times... I like it. I love the Villa. Well. Now I actually have to write something myself...
Mercutioslover 2005-09-09 ch 14,	abuseI love it. T'is wonderful. Makes me happy. I love tongue in cheek parodies like this one where there's just enough of joke that it all could just be a very bad story. It's very excellent. Update soon.
Wesley The Dark Prince 2005-08-16 ch 14,	abuseAh yes that chapter was as satisfying as some greasy fast food. I ecspecially love the cave filled with random princesses. I had totally perfect visualisation of that part in my head. Hm yes well this chapter was much better than the last one. Arigaligaligaliho was more plumped up, character-wise, and the jokes seemed more subtle. Say Leah Claire, because that's your name you know, I just read not one but two fantasy novels. Antrax (by YOUR FAVORITE Terry Brooks) and The Crystal Throne (or something along those lines). Anyway I found the latter incredibly bad. I mean it had everything. Mysterious figures in cloaks, an old woman with sharp wit, men who prophesize, and a Rutgeur Hauer-esque bad guy with white hair. So if you need some more inspiration, and if that actually is the name of the book, you might wanna check it out. You'll be dissapointed! Anyway I'm glad you added another chapter. I hope that in the coming weeks you'll stop your daily activities, including your job, so you can devote all your time writing chapters to this story of sharp wit. Because when nerds with cheasy names about dark princes want you to write more, you better write more. Hope to see more!
Kitty-Lou-who 2005-08-07 ch 14,	abuseHey, what? That's it? No! Even though I've been reading this thing for like an hour straight through I can't believe it's over. Nope. Tis truly awesome by the way.
Anagronax 2004-11-26 ch 13,	abusesigh... And again, I almost missed two chapters! dramatic pose /(-o- ) Well, I'm sure glad I didn't :p. Soo.. a dragon eh?... Well, it was to be expected XD. You don't go around prancing and getting to be the center of old prophecies and defeating barbarian hordes without attracting a dragon :p. I wonder whether this could possibly be the Dragon that dwelled in the Haunted Cave(tm)... XD. I am a bit miffed about her not getting Herbie the Happy Cow though... :(... Come on! A cow would've had so many cool and useless powers! Like Quick Grazing(tm) and Hypno Cow-Stare of DOm(tm)! :pAnyway, a marvelous two chapters! Keep on going and don't you dare stop without it having a conclusive Happy Ending(tm) :3.
whohasthezebra 2004-08-12 ch 11, anon.	abuseyeah, can't login because on a technicality, i have kinda already reviewed. So! I like the "Glittering Green Eyes" bit. All in all, fabulous job so far. Have you read Kelley and the Italian Guy? It's as fun to write as this story.
Repair My Wings 2004-08-10 ch 13,	abuseThe big dragon is a nice touch. Well here are the answers to you questions: A1: I changed my name because Exciting Adventurous Music tm I was bored A2: a troup of proffesionals would have to work for weeks on end to make my sister laugh To guard the villa wouldn't you want some nice decorative carnivorous plant?
Wesley The Dark Prince 2004-08-05 ch 13,	abuseHow come this chapter is so short. Why does the bad guy live in a villa? How do you pronounce the dragons name? WHy is Mars red? Why are tress blue? But who cares? Now that unlucky chapter 13 is done you can speed it up and give us some genuine chapters. I noticed that the recent chapters have a very different feel to them. It's getting more and more...American, if I may say so. The first ten were very sophisticated and well written but lately the chapters ahve been getting more and more vulgar and annoying. Now you may smite me, and smite you will. I just remembered a story I wrote a couple of years ago. It was alot like this, the names were pretty stupid. I might as well give you some of them: Maxximiola, Jim Grimm, Eonaphelonameradine, Feldoromax, Kikiwakimakapapaloos, un-fairies. I am so the suggestion King!
Wesley The Dark Prince 2004-08-03 ch 12,	abuseI think that's the shortest chapter in the story. Well there's my review. Hah hah HAH! I GOT YOU! I saw Shrek 2 a couple of days ago, it's pretty funny. If you wanted to rip off fairy tales than you could have characters such as Pinnochio, and Rapunzel thrown in at various times. I might as well put down all fantastical things that could be parodied(sp?). Lightning, dragons that move like rubber (e.g: neo in the matrix 2+3), tall towers, markets (sqaures, bazaars etc.), ruinous buildings, swords, wild savages (oh he's darker than me, he must be a savage), inhuman guards, centaurs (there so damn proud), unicorns, volcanoes, any wild/extreme geographical feautures, fairy godmothers, dwarves, large forests, fairies (pixies, sprites, nymphs, spirits, leprachauns, Katie Couric, gnomes, satyrs, fauns), Giants, lots of gold, jewels to go with the gold, exotic foods (with matching exotic people), flying ships, large boats, remnants of the past (just like Terry Brooks!) And that's about it. Buhbye
Repair My Wings 2004-08-02 ch 12,	abuseThis is the former 1 of the Heatless Flame. Enough with the introductions. Well it took long enough for this chapter to get up =P. But this story doesn't get old it even made my sister laugh. Where is the typical Eville Beast in this story? Like the Dragon that guards the castle or the Pheonix (sp) or Minotar, etc. No story is complete without one of those.
Rebecca JJ 2004-05-08 ch 11, anon.	abuseHahahhahaH! Love this. My roommate was bored, so we started reading this outloud to eachother. :D heehee
Amor Vincit Omnia 2004-05-02 ch 1,	abuseLol...Can't stop laughing...:D _Amor_
clover tarrian 2004-04-01 ch 1,	abuseEehaahaha! This is muchly funny! I must go and work on my evil research project now because I promised I would, but I will definately come back and read more. Bye!

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