|Reviews for Warrior Mage Princess Eldana|
| pennydeath 8/31/03 . chapter 8
Oh, I _do_ love this. So many lovely cliches...but, as with all parodies (weirdly) they're written in perfectly. I like the random capital letters. And, remembering previous books, I've recognized Eldana in at least three series...Fiery Nature (trademark). You're a genius.
| pennydeath 8/30/03 . chapter 1
Oh, brilliant. I just finished reading The Tough Guide and recognized quite a few things...very fun. And it's well-written, too! *runs off to read more*
| Anagronax 8/23/03 . chapter 8
I apolagize for not having any stupid cliches that pop up in my mind... Please keep this story going. Cliche-bashing is fun!
Oh wait! I do have some cliches! What about this cliche with an abondanned, gorgeous castle on a mountain or forest or similar location TM that you can't leave once you've eaten some of the Foods TM? Would you perhaps consider putting that in?
Or how about the cliche of the Foreign, Magical Language That Sounds Like A Sick Bunny Wailing TM?
Oh! And let's not forget the overuse of Archaic words TM! Oh yes! That one would be truly bash-worthy!
| One Winged Angel's Lover 8/19/03 . chapter 8
I'll be honored to have you as my beta! Sorry this took so long my computer died. A wonderful story! You are so talented! I can't wait for more!
| Aeitul 8/15/03 . chapter 8
Of course she was going to fall. I think that's one of the biggest cliches in the world-and not just for fantasy stories. The female lead falls, the male lead saves her, and they have a touching little moment. You handled that cliche well. I especially like how you pointed out that they didn't realize that they'd had a "true Moment."
I think that one of the best things about this whole story is that they (Eldana and Tanin at least) are aware of the cliches that exist. Not in a "Oh, how cliche" type of way, but instead in a way that they know what to do when faced with cliches. Since I'm not entirely sure even I understand what I've written here, I'll give an example: They (Eldana and Tanin, of course. Mandy seems totally unaware of these cliches) know that they should take the rope bridge. And then Eldana knew that the horses would make it across.
One last thing... I've noticed that you use "al right." It's better than "alright," I'll admit, but I've learned that the correct way to write it is "all right." So, you were close.
Okay, I think this review is long enough. In the spirit of things, I'll end with a cliche: Update soon!
| Aeitul 8/13/03 . chapter 1
Gah! When it seems that you have at long last updated again, there was a mistake somewhere in the uploading. There's two chapter 7's! For the drop-down menu, chapter 8 has a different title, but it's actually chapter 7 again. Just thought you'd like to know!
| Avid Dreaming 8/8/03 . chapter 8
Funny. Very funny. I think I know what the riddling wizeman thing is about, but maybe I don't. I like riddles though.
| Kell Hound 8/8/03 . chapter 8
great job keep writing
| Wesley The Dark Prince 8/7/03 . chapter 1
Okay, I haven't been here for a while, but I mentioned orgasms in my last review, that was a bit confusing, oui? so my apologies, but, just to be persistent. You should have singing tree's that attack the group before starting into a balled, and you should include the stereotypical old wizard who says funny things and dies in a horrile, and extremly bizarre death...or not.
| Nik 6/27/03 . chapter 7
I think I'll choose the last bridge. Congrats to Eldana from saving poor Tanin from Mesto...you know the rest. haha. Anyway, I'm glad you've established that Mandy's a thief. Who'd have guess a kid kleptomaniac? The cliches are wonderful! And you'd better get updating (I read about your stories being in one place while you're in another...that's not cool!)!
| A-wolf-called-Skya 6/21/03 . chapter 1
thats pretty good! i didn't spot any spelling errors(but i really didn't look closely)but anyways.
thanx for reviewing Call To The Sky! it now has 10 chapters completed, to let you no, since you said you had an interest in it. good story!Rachel Morgan.
P.S. i have just posted the first chapter of a new story call The Untamed Unicorn, its about humans discovering unicorns and capturing them. but a runty unicorn that gets bullied will save them all
see ya later!
| FlamingSmileyFace 6/21/03 . chapter 1
*dies laughing* I have read the enchanted forest chronicles, (they were one of my first series of fantasy books)and I must say your story does real justice to this type of genre, persay? After reading this first chapter I know I've been hopelessly sucked into reading the rest...
| Naja Copperleaf 6/13/03 . chapter 7
Of course we do! Excellent job. I really enjoy reading it. I like the dynamic between the characters-'alright let's get it over with.'Hope to check back a little sooner next time.
| whohasthezebra 6/8/03 . chapter 7
Yay, this gets better and better. I love the innuendo, and the fact that everyone knows who they are but themselves. Go sparkles! i watched velvet goldmine last night, so my mind is set to glitterglam mode.
ANyhoo, i have to work on my story, though tis finals week, so i will be working on and off on it.
wow, that was a confusing sentence
| Absolute Alcohol 6/7/03 . chapter 7
Damn, I've been away too long and haven't reviewed since chapter 4. *smacks self*
This keeps getting better. But dammit, you haven't included Eldana nearly getting kidnapped and sold into slave labour! And also the Emotionally Deprived man/woman who feels no emotion whatsoever until his/her icy exterior is cracked by a member of the cast. Possibly by making a father/daughter or mother/daughter connection with Mandy. Hmm.
May there be more cliche bashing soon!