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Non-existent Puritanism 12/27/03 . chapter 1
Mh I liked it. Nice poem.
Banpaia Daisho 10/24/03 . chapter 1
Why drop the repetition pattern at the start of the lines midway through, then bring it back? Stick with one or the other. Good poem otherwise.