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| blackwings 2003-05-04 ch 1,   | Have to agree, but is that bad if I write lyrics for a band for fun, and they're using them? Hm... Good rap, btw |
| zipple 2003-04-08 ch 1, | had to review the lonely one first. This is good. Seeing that you're 17 now and it was written when you were 13/14. Very good. The rhyme sceem is good and the actual material is excellent. I think if you were to go through and just re-edit a few things now, it might be more polished, but genuinely one of the better poems/songs that I've read here. Not that I've read that many mind you... Now onto the next! |