Definitely something that people can relate to. I loved "we don't know the dance and we look like tourists, but that's OK." Great job!

Just. . . wow. *shakes her head* How do you do it? Everything I read just seems to get better and better. The writing, the descriptions, the emotions. I loved the line -
'Make this cliché movie moment with me until our credits roll and the very last person exits the theater, unable to reason why they should stay any longer.'
There was one line that might need to be changed -
'I want to run through the daisies at springtime . . . can't decide whether to sneeze and giggle.'
Shouldn't it be 'sneeze or giggle?'
However, as a whole it was, simply put, bloody brilliant. :) I enjoyed reading it very much! Every line seems to jump out and make it so much more enjoyable. You’re amazing, I loved it! *struts around with a Ally’s fan forever banner*
~DI
P.S. - Sorry about how the reviews are getting shorter each time. Heh, this is probably the most I've reviewed in the past year. I just couldn't read your works without giving you some type of feedback!
P.P.S. - Oops looks like this will be the last review for right now, my Mom’s dragging me off to some meeting. Until I review again!

This captures every thing I want in my life! I love it keep this up.

Sweet! The whole scene felt very dream-like, a very successful effect. Only one structure error: shouldn't it be "sneeze or giggle" instead of "sneeze and giggle"?