Wow makes you wonder what life would be like for the blind. Without sight does the world still hold beauty.

Sight is relative, if the man has never had vision, then he isn't blind.

Interesting. In the absence of vision create your own world. Nice poem.

very nice pattern and imagery, or lack thereof

like the way you think within the ink!

This is a lovely Tanka!

I love how you used sun and stars as the thing that can't be seen.

I can't imagine living in dark world, so lonely.

this is a lovely Haiku!

Awesome! Keep writing..

I liked it.

Heart of the Sword

A tanka? *hmm* I don't know about it, it's surely okay for me. :o) You've written a nice piece here... I like it -I'd have to say that I wouldn't know what a blind man sees.

DW