Gods above, but that's so sad.

You wrote this beautifully. It comes across as very innocent and delicate. If that made any sense, lol. I loved the stanza:

"Can a person who was never loved attract another?
Can they make the right choice on who to love?
Can I tell who will love and who will leave?
And will I never tell them my feelings before they leave?"

I can really relate to that. Great poem, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

^^ Nice...fluffy...and EVER SO GAY! O.O It IS yoai yes? ^^ straight to the point! Keep on writting you're doing great!!

How sad...it's very good. You should definitely keep writing!

""And when you’re gone
I’ll finally be able to say
“Yes, I love you!”
But it will be too late…""

i like this paragraph. . great writing keep it up and i'll keep reading. it's very deep and i like that kind of poetry/ music . . .yeah. .thanks for listening to me ramble