I didn't expect that last line. When I read the last line I understood everything tho. I used to sit on my bed with my music box in my hand watching the girl dance. I wanted to be her... (I know I know random but that is what I thought about when I finished the poem.)

*Weirdest sense of deja vu* I'd swear I've read this poem before in the past *blinks* I thought I reviewed it too...odd. It's good though ^^' don't mind me and my odd thoughts.

sweet...good poem.

i LOVE this!really...you keep up the good work!*smiles*

That's so cute...

I loved the end... :-)


Blue cherry

That's wonderful. I was trying to figure it out, and I didn't until the end. I like it.