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Celeblas Elentari Manwe 2003-08-13 . chapter 1
I know exactly where this is comming from, I have friends like that act like this towards me too. Sometimes I think it would be better if I just left them, but in the end it would hurt me to leave them. Because I know that they really need me. Well written! Much love!
-hugs and kisses-
~Cele.
Winter's Roar 2003-08-08 . chapter 1
wow I have nothing to say that is a worthy enough review for this poem. I'm, yet again, left nearly speechless. This is incredible. Such a range of emotions, this almost sounds like a song, it just really flows well. Makes me understand how people could take their own life, if they felt this bad. I loved the "i don't need an angle to watch over me, in truth i'd always hoped that that was what i'd be." ouch, can def relate to that on, and having no one to teach, no one to listen, yeah. You've taken such an overlooked common problem and expressed it so painfully, so clearly. Thanks!

~ winter
TTG 2003-07-08 . chapter 1
Wow! Great poem.
It nicley expresses ur feelings.
Good rhyming.
:)
qx24v57 2003-06-10 . chapter 1
I sat here, in front of my computer, for an hour just trying to come up with something to say in response to this poem. Just when I thought that I had grasped at least a word to convey my emotions, it slipped away...And then I thought, if I reread the poem again, but reading it in a different frame of mind, I might be able to come up with some sort of review worthy of this verse...I think I failed miserably. I am just at a loss for words over this certain peom. It conveys so many emotions in a single verse, that it blew me away. In a sense, I can fully understand what the person is trying to say. I can relate...Who or what is the poem about? What is the person telling the poem really trying to say? I have all these questions about it! Great job! Though I think you got that idea from my speechlessness. LOL
Ranewen Surion 2003-04-09 . chapter 1
This one actually scares me beth, and makes me feel kinda guilty...i didn't do any thing and this isn't about me is it, cuz i feel with my mood that i've had lately really sucks and i'm not sure what i'm doing to any one or even to myself, and i am begining to see why people go suicidal...any way. I love ya and i'll talk to you later, oh and good poem by the way!
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