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Jolie warner 2004-02-12 . chapter 6
This story is so great. I can relate so well to it. None of this story can be improved. It's perfect!
*~Jolie Warner~*
vanburen 2003-11-30 . chapter 4
ah, guy friends...in my opinion, they are both a blessing and a curse (b/c of the fact that sometimes uncomfortable sexual tension pops up)
vanburen 2003-11-30 . chapter 3
this is so sweet...not that i'm patronizing you or anything! It's just reading this, it all seems so familiar!
vanburen 2003-11-09 . chapter 6
Puh-leeze continue with this story! It put me in stiches (not that I'm laughing at you or anything) My first year in band was in Summer '99 too, and I couldn't roll step to save my soul. I was also convinced that my section leader hated me. It didn't help that I played flute, which automatcially made us the brunt of all of the ditz jokes. It was cool though, and now that I'm in college, band is the thing I miss most. Did you like your band? I can't tell from your story, you seem to have some mixed feelings!

I apologize in advance for the shameless plug that starts here!
pleez r/r my story, it's my first one!

update this one, I love it!
lamiapiratess 2003-11-08 . chapter 6
Hola, finally you updated! I really liked this chapter, it really reminded me of when I used to write in my journal. Its like you took this chapter right out of my own diary!
lamiapiratess 2003-09-23 . chapter 5
LOL! Funny chapter, just wish it was longer!
Anne Catherine 2003-09-22 . chapter 5
great charectors and all, good "plot" however, i think u should edit out some charecters. unless they have a bigger role in the future updates. PLZ UPDATE! lol u have an amazing writing talent -- keep it up, K? oh, and ALSO - i would change ur rating to pg13 cuz sum of the stuff is a lil but...ugh and also, dont u think S.moon is kinda wierd for a 9th grader to be obsesing over? lol
lamiapiratess 2003-05-14 . chapter 4
Hey, good chapter!! Write more sometime soon, plz!! This poor girl, I feel so sorry for her, but yet at the same time can't help not like her character. Maybe Alex will be her new "love"...
lamiapiratess 2003-05-07 . chapter 3
Good chapter, but I wish it was longer, oh well!!
Jewels06 2003-04-20 . chapter 2
since this isn't based off of you, i don't know how much you know about the details of band life. i could tell you some stuff about being a band geek and life revolving around band if you want any ideas.
Jewels06 2003-04-20 . chapter 1
I'm a band geek, and it's good to read something about a band geek. You have to add on, i want to read more.
lamiapiratess 2003-04-14 . chapter 2
Hey, good chapter 2, write more, plz!!
Monday Sapphire 2003-04-12 . chapter 2
I really sweet story!! I can't believe that some one was brave enough to put their own diary on the internet. II story just made me feel warm and happy inside. To know that i'm not alone in the world, that everyone has to go through the same things. Your story was really great and I bet lots of people are going to read it and want to do the saame thhings.
lamiapiratess 2003-04-09 . chapter 1
Good diary story, write more!!
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