Wow, what was really good about this poem was the part where you commented on how out of confusion, and the gloom, there's still a rainbow. It's short, but it has more meaning than a million words could. (and also: thankyou for my first review o.O ^__^)

hey its libby! great poem, very poetic! i suck at writing so dont read anything i write! well, really, ur poem is great and ttyl!

...Very nice... Though the set up is a bit awkward (is it the way fp.net set it up?) It's almost... It almost makes me feel religious, it's just really beautiful and gorgeous... Heavenly. I'm not making sense, am I? Oh well... Lol. x

A little hard to read, maybe should re-upload in better format.

It's a bit difficult to disect, especially the third line. Taken for its surface value creates a nice visual. It felt like it had a 'spring' feel.

I really like this poem. I just don't understand the part about the mercenaries. Maybe you could explain it to me? A hint:If you do your work in a word document, save it as a webpage, then it'll be poetry form, not one paragraph.
:D Good work tho!