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| AOK 2008-01-26 ch 29,  | abuseThis story made me cry a few times. It's very realistic to me, and I don't find that in many stories. It was tragic, but also very beautiful...I have to go find the other stories now. But I'm truly glad I found this one. Thank you for writing it! |
| strykr 2007-02-24 ch 29, anon. | abusethis story... is great. different. sweet and... I really love Chris. It was a really good read and I'm glad you're writting a sequal because if you weren't... I'd be dead by now. Kudos to you, antiqone1! |
| Faedora 2006-10-09 ch 29, | abuseThis story was unlike any other I've read. I have to admit, I'm not a deep person. I guess I could be shallow, and I'm young...and naive at times, so I don't understand these traumatizing events. But your story made me realize differently. It never occurred to me that there are people who go through so much to save a loved one...and there are those who are traumatized so severely that it's basically untreatable. Your story made me see so much, so thanks for that. It's the first non-cliched and lovey-dovey story I've read on fictionpress, and I love it, truly. Much love to you, Antigone1, and thank you once again. |
| Ghostmoon Dancer 2006-09-19 ch 29, anon. | abuseWonderful story, couldn't stop reading. |
| OnTheOutsideLookingIn 2006-08-04 ch 29, | abuseWoah, I just read this whole thing in one sitting... I'm not sure what to say. Um, this is the first story to make me bawl like a baby in awhile. It was beautifully written, and you have a very unique style. I love it to death. Now it's on to your next story. Fantastic, beautiful job. I was really touched by this novel. |
| Nyte Shade 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI just started reading this one of my friends reccommended it to me. This is really good im looking forward to reading more. |
| CreativeEdge 2005-10-29 ch 29, | abuseWow i just finished reading this , it completly blew me away , i can't even begin to explain...this story just drew me in and hooked me , michael's character was so torn so hopless and yet somehow he manages to carry on. Your writing is absolutly intense and amazing , just enough detail , just enough suspence and the most beautifully descriptive emotions.Well i'm off to read the sequel ,-Ani |
| sar.h 2005-10-24 ch 29, | abuseWHAT?! You can't just end it after that line!!:O Oh my God... this story made me so tense. Pleaase explain what's up with Chris:O |
| JC Jaquez 2005-02-15 ch 29, | abusepoor Chris. of course Mike doesn't hate him... |
| JC Jaquez 2005-02-15 ch 28, | abuse=) |
| JC Jaquez 2005-02-15 ch 27, | abuseoh... and he was just starting to get better... stupid letters... messed up dad. |
| JC Jaquez 2005-02-15 ch 26, | abuseNO! |
| JC Jaquez 2005-02-15 ch 25, | abuseig for Uncle Ron. |
| JC Jaquez 2005-02-15 ch 24, | abuseI think Mike may be getting a little better! not pushing his brother's attempts away so much anymore... opening up a little. yay for Steve... |
| JC Jaquez 2005-02-15 ch 23, | abusesorry, my internet died and I stopped reviewing... here, I guess? anyway -- still reading. pregnant?? |