I liked the end of the piece, and the whole feeling of nostalgia throughout. You might consider using the word 'she' less (especially in the beginning) and your sentences tend to lapse into predictable patterns, but the whole idea behind the story was excellent. I really liked the "her life is a movie" comparison, and the line about "scattered yesterdays."

Great job! Keep writing.

Wow that was great. I loved it keep writing.