Reviews for A Chance for Romance

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JusticeWriter 2007-07-21 ch 35,	abuseNo offense but this have got to be the worst ending in the history of fanfiction stories. It's by far the worst ending I've ever read.
siddika 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseVERY GOOD STORY.
youpin 2006-12-24 ch 1,	abuseGood job.
akaCHEEKS 2006-09-17 ch 9,	abusethis story is too cheesy.. but it's in the skwo awards or something. so i'l read it.. or was it in another person's favorite stories. i have no idea i forgot already. but yeah. i'll read the rest tomorrow!!
akaCHEEKS 2006-09-12 ch 6,	abusehaha lolz
akaCHEEKS 2006-09-11 ch 4,	abusehaha.. but it's kind of confusing.. and no offense but annoying.. cause then you would write it in both of their point of views.. and i have no problem with that but why repeat whatever they say in their heads and the conversations?? that's like wasting our time, especially yours and also making us restless cause then we'll be reading the same things over.. and chances are.. we're just going to skip the part we already know and we might miss an important event.. get me? but i guess you can't do anything about it now since you're already done with the whole thing.. but if you ever plan on revising and editing it.. keep that in mind... k??
akaCHEEKS 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abusecool
Faith Miragrehich 2006-05-21 ch 31,	abuseYo Dudette! Love ur story...BUT i still cant belive how smart a 4 year old gril can get...I mean what the heck? I have a sister and she started to talk around about the age of 2 and she didnt know what the heck she was talking about until she was 5. I asked her something when she was 3 and a half, i remember this because it was so stoopid... me: 'hey sheer, what colour is you're shirt, i really like it' Sheer: 'fath...fathie...nyea nyea sikan' which if u translate it means chicken...its got nothing to do with anything but i still think that there is no way that a 4 year old can be as smart as the Dea character u have in this story. Its just unbelievable. Other than that, I LOVE UR STORY!
sodalabels 2006-01-29 ch 35,	abuseI was annoyed at the ending, but I don't know why you made it that way. You could have just ended it earlier. Personally I hate sad endings, but I'm glad she regrets her decision.
Alenor 2006-01-18 ch 35,	abuseyou can't be serious! i actually liked this story until you cut it off short and split them up. i think that you should've made the ending slightly different but ahh well, i guess it's your story. i hope you don't mind but i'm going to disregard the last chappie and just act as though this is unfinished. cya later.
emerald 2005-12-17 ch 35, anon.	abuseblink WHAT? are you mad or something? that wasn't a proper ending...at all...and you know it...her life is completely ruined yo uknow that...and aaron is the only one who can fix it...how can you end it there?
emerald 2005-12-17 ch 31, anon.	abusedea is TOO MATURE...very unrealistic...i love the story so far...it's interesting and well-paced and the plot's very good...but dea is too old for her age...she should be seven or something...you havn't talked to any four year kids have you? even if she's been through a hard life...she's too mature in this chapter...change her age.
Flame/Compliment 2005-07-09 ch 35, anon.	abuseThis probably isn't a normal review; but I think it is necessary to flame and compliment your story. I personally do not like the sappy, happy-go-lucky endings that so many romance stories have because life just doesn't work that way. People get hurt and that's life, and for your unhappy ending I must compliment you. Unfortunately the way you set up your story was deceptive from the start and for that you deserve a flame. The whole Aaron and Tina falling for each other without a thought in the world but perfect happiness is as unrealistic as it gets. People do have doubts and for that, the method you used to approach your unhappy ending/resolution was absolutely inappropriate. And for that, I think I wasted my time reading your story; quite unlucky since I have practically no freetime. I can only hope that from now on your stories have more consistency to them. And Tina was a rather two dimensional character. Try to give the characters more dimensions next time.
blue umbrella 2005-05-18 ch 35,	abusedid you have to break them up? they went through so much to be together and they make such a nice couple and they have such deep feelings for each other. it's not fair to just break them up.i really don't like this ending. i'm doubly ** because the stories i read for the past few days all have sad endings.
Lily-007 2005-05-01 ch 34,	abuseI have to post this like a chapter 34's review. ( sorry )Just want to add that I don't know if I was being mean or rude ( hell no lol ) But it wasn't my intentions if it's like that you'd feel it.So, just to tell you I already read Through fire and flame, and I like your writing.Well with this said, I can go ;)++

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