this is good, thx for reviewing my stuff. sorry i can't review all of your stuff but it seems good

That's pretty. :) It reminds me of something my, er, friend kind of did, that idiot.

ANYWAYS! I like this.

I love your poems.. I think it's so simple and short but really... sad.. *sniff* I don't know.. I'm really bad at putting things in words..

AH! My breath held in my chest. I liked that. Heh...I liked how u didn't make the person jump...u gave it a twist coz usually (in my poems and others) the just let them die so u kno that kinda gave it a twist and I liked it too...good job.._

Sandra

well that was wonderful it was sad at first but it ended happy good for you splinded job