Reviews for Rain
Drizit 4/2/05 . chapter 1
Ah. Good piece here buddy. The last one was also a good piece but i keep forgetting to mention them! huh.. Anyway, this one and the other poem has nice imagery to it.
Franken 3/12/04 . chapter 1
Oh, this was really really good! Loved the descriptions, especially your first line. Although I think you have it as 8-6-8, does that work for a Haiku? I'm not sure. It was good though!

Franken
Cirien Phoenix 4/17/03 . chapter 1
I'm a Phoenix! I baird of FLAMES! I can't go stand in the rain or it'll put me out. I'll cry (*already has tears*) The rain is evil, but I still like it. I like this poem too.

Cirien Phoenix
Needa S 4/15/03 . chapter 1
Awesome job!
Werewolf Nighteyes 4/11/03 . chapter 1
Rain! (dances around) I love rain!
Kowski 4/11/03 . chapter 1
Cool! I likes a lot! Even tho i'm not much for haikus...you are good at it! woo! XP
Princess Mulan 4/11/03 . chapter 1
Lovely describtion!

Great job!
Keep it 100 4/11/03 . chapter 1
Nice.

Heart of the Sword
hoellenwauwau 4/11/03 . chapter 1
Great haiku, loved it!

cio, hoellenwauwau