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| Justin Webb 2006-07-18 ch 117, | abuseThis is an amazing story; I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep writing please! |
| giulia elisabetta 2006-01-04 ch 118, | abuseBummer. I was getting all excited...and it ended. I truly do hope that you finish this story-even if you don't feel that it's as time-worthy as some others. As disappointed as I am, I completely understand. I'm a senior this year, and the course load is ridiculous. On top of that, I also have violin lessons (my planned major...so i have to practice a lot, too..), piano, orchestra, and stuff like that. And our school musical is starting up now. People think it is insane that I balance such a schedule, but it's possible, and it's nice to hear of someone else doing so as well. Plus you have your fantastic writing on top of it all. You said you do Celtic fiddle? Interesting. I did some fiddle when I was little, but my parents really steered me towards classical, which I love, but, consequently, my improv skills are a bunch of crap. So...i love celtic anything, but i do a lot more listening than attempted playing. Okay, this is getting to be a long review, and really doesn't have anything to do with the story. So now I'll go attempt to finish some homework, while in my mind I'll be pondering your story...which of your stories posted do you suggest that I read now? you can e-mail me if you want, or have time... julzeL06@cs.comGood luck with everything! |
| giulia elisabetta 2006-01-04 ch 97, | abuseOnce again, I'm thouroughly enjoying this story...I'm getting in a chapter or two every moment that I can! That bracelet/necklace stuff sounds an aweful lot like Wheel of Time...but it's okay. Borrowing is what authors do best. I can't wait to read more!julia |
| giulia elisabetta 2006-01-03 ch 77, | abuseWow. I'm completely in awe of and thoroughly impressed by your story! I found this story sometime last year and read part of it. I'm not really sure why I stopped, but something recently reminded me of it...and now I can't stop reading it! Where on earth do you get your ideas? They're very original and I love your writing. I can't wait to finish this one (though I'll be sad to know it's over), and read your others! ~julia |
| dragin halfling 2005-12-09 ch 48, anon. | abuseRodair really is quite an idiot, isn't he? And yet, he's one of my favorite characters. I liked Tanlen more. |
| dragon halfling 2005-12-05 ch 22, anon. | abuseNO! |
| dragon halfling 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseeh heh heh...I Like... |
| Otaria of the Calmer Sea 2005-10-25 ch 5, | abuseAugh! I haven't reviewed for days! This has definitely been one of those weeks where I fall asleep trying to write admissions essays, so I haven't had any time for. . .well, a life. Anyway, I want to be able to have a ball of light whenever I need one! That would have been so nice last week when both the bulbs in my room burned out at the same time and I was stuck in the dark. . .yeah. I'll be ba-ack. . . |
| Otaria of the Calmer Sea 2005-10-15 ch 4, | abuseWell, I fell asleep without touching the computer last night, and the night before I reviewed under the wrong name (oops!) but I'm back now. Poor Rodair. . .I mean, I definitely don't always sympathize with him, but I do for his magic problem. And people taking books away from him, I would definitely have to fight the urge to maim someone like Katiye. I want to be able to teleport! |
| PrincessEilonwy 2005-10-13 ch 3, | abuseRodair got told. . .oh no. I'm channeling my little sister. . .*blinks, shakes head* Ok, I'm good. This is so weird, knowing what happens to the characters already. Yeah, yeah, I learned my lesson, next time I'll review from the start. Rodair at this point is like a cross between my really uptight, studious friend and my friend who has random "I hate the world" days. It's pretty funny, but I'm glad I'm not that bad during final exam week. . .I shall return! |
| Otaria of the Calmer Sea 2005-10-12 ch 2, | abuseHaha, I love Rodair. Well, no, I don't love his personality at this point, but I know he gets better so I don't feel quite as much like strangling him as I would otherwise. Plus, I share his freakish love of books. His room sounds like mine, with all the piles of books. Good chapter. . .until tomorrow! |
| Otaria of the Calmer Sea 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseAagh! Smitten by conscience. So, I confess, I've already read most of this story during the summer, but I feel guilty about not reviewing. And since it was during the summer and I'm sure I've forgotten a lot, I'm going to try to read and review one chapter every night to unwind before bed. So, first chapter. . .I remember the first time I read this I already liked Avaline after just one chapter. And Rodair reminds me of people I know. Good chapter, I shall return tomorrow! |
| someone you dont know 2005-09-23 ch 56, anon. | abuseokay, avaline is just being a plain ** right about now. what was with blaming rodair for katiye's death? |
| me 2005-09-23 ch 55, anon. | abusenot to be mean but YES katiye died. i hated her. but that's tough on avaline. two deaths that she has to grieve over. |
| AWritersFantasy 2005-08-14 ch 7, | abuseHello. I reviewed your story a while back. Never got around to finishing it, but I love it. Your story is sort of what inspired me to create something in the story I'm working on, and I'm at 56 pages at the moment. I love this story so far. Do you mind if I add your LJ to my friends list? I'm not trying to be all stalker-ish or anything, but I've been thinking about telling you that I love your Ways of Magic story, so now I have. ^_^ Anyway, my LJ username is AWritersFantasy, so go ahead and add me (if you want)...or we could just...chat on AIM? JedioftheFlame or AWriterofFantasy are my screen names. This is probably one of the weirdest reviews you've received, and I feel a little weird about sending it to you, but I really liked your story. ^_^ |