Its Sonya :D It is wonderful lark I'm going to call you soon.
What Chapter did I come in I don't remeber? Well ttyl

It looks interesting.

But this doesn't make sense to me: "My name is Locket Stone, better known as Locke. Mainly because I'm the only child thief in Bashile." Are you saying that her name is shortened because she is a child?

"(Rosalina's currency)." It is good that you explain unfamiliar terms, but if you ever wanted to, maybe you can put a glossary at the start of a chapter, that way you can mention your new words, and you don't have to stop and explain it.

Is "Dual" the way they spell "duel" there? That'd be cool.

Other than that, I rather this.

Another great chapter! I love how you introduced the new characters and even just the new characters themselves! I definately can't wait to read more, so keep up the terrific writing and let me know when you post again!
~Sakura Sage

Excellent Chapter!! That was the best one so far. Well, worth the wait. But another month!? NO lol.
Um all of them have names that are gems or stones? I don't know just a guess.

Anyway this chapter reminded me why this story is in my favorites! Can't wait for the next update!

This sounds like it will blossom into a good story! keep going! if you want to read something sometime, check out my story "Call To The Sky" about a wolf and a prophecy she must fulfill to save the world.

ttyl!


Rachel Morgan.

*Jaw hits ground* Wonderful chapter! Hehe...I feel so special now...you mentioned me in your 'thanks' *big grin* ^-^ Well, I'm now dying to read on and definately can't wait to read more! Well, good luck with everything and keep up the great writing!
~Sakura Sage

she actually would talk to anowa?! i would have killed him.. painfully. guess its just me. good dtory so..update soon please
-krissa

I love it! I am adding it to my favorites. I can't wait for the next chapter, now that she is out on her own and the adventure is begining

You really did leave off on a cliffhanger! You evil, evil person! Hehe...I hope you update SOON! You've got me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens! Well, good luck with your writing and I can't wait for another chapter!
~Sakura Sage

This is interesting! You have wonderful detail and I love the way you make Locke seem so childish! Hehe...Well, Love what you got so far and I can't wait to read more!
~Sakura Sage

How's Locke gonna get out of that one? Although I have to ask, how are they going to kill the whole guild? They'll have to catch them first XP
Yep, Final Fantasy whatever-number-it-was was re-released as FFVI, with Celes, Locke, Terra, etc. After reading your profile, I found out that you do know the name similarities with Locket and Locke.
I want a part in the story! :P
Aww, I feel so loved. You put up chapters because of me? Sniff. I'm touched.

Another interesting chapter. You set the scene of the town and the characters well: I'm starting to get an idea of what Locke's like.
Oh, just for your own personal information, there's actually a thief character called Locke in the video game Fantasy Fantasy VI. That name always makes me think of a mischevious thief, tee hee.
I forgot to mention in my last review that you'd spelt "thief" as "theif" all the way through and in the title, but you seem to have corrected that without my help ^_^
Aww, you wrote this chapter all for me? I'm flattered XP
I wouldn't expect Locke to be incredibly mature, just thought I'd mention it. Everybody has a different mental age and circumstances can change it.
Wow, this is a long review. Think I'll end it here then. Well done!

You've got a good start here: an interesting idea for a story. I like the way that the scene is set, with it being narrated by the girl herself, although it seems that someone a little younger than 14 is telling it.
There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes: you put in a few extra apostrophes (for example, "sit's" and "want's" should just be "sits" and "wants"), and the only spelling that stuck in my memory was "sceme", which should be "scheme". I'm way too perfectionisty ^^;;
But aside from that, I enjoyed reading this.