i think this is my favorite poem of yours. the idea make me want to write a story for it. 8)

the last line hit me pretty hard, i like this peom so much but it's so sad. but then again, if it were all cheery and about bunnys and flowers i'd probably just get sick reading it. i can picture this all so clearly in my mind, though. 8)

Whoa. I like this. I think it's good. Very cool. I like the theme, too. And also the way it's written. The pattern is different and I like, so that's all that matters. :)

-Gia