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| Linnet 2003-11-22 ch 5, | abuseWow, these poems are beautiful. I look forward to reading more. - Agent A A A |
| Misty Woods 2003-06-24 ch 4, | abuseThis is very meaningful. I like the way you repeat the phrase 'that won't return' in every stanza. Great! |
| Misty Woods 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this! Your ending to the poem is great and comes as a surprise. You'll never be able to guess this from the title. Good job! P.S. And thanks a lot for the review! :) |
| ionlyliveindreams 2003-04-11 ch 2, | abuseWoah! The one called "Oceans Unglorified" is great!! I love the part when you said, "It roars "Do not admire my beauty, be in awe of my power, and enticed by my size." and then the last part after that made me laugh... I guess it's cuz I'm in a laughing mood but it's still cool! Keep writing ~ionlyliveindreams |