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KimHua 2007-01-02 . chapter 17
NO! :-) Please, please update this soon. It's so good.

I really like the drama and emotion you've managed to convey.
ChicagoMyth 2004-08-06 . chapter 17
I really like this... please update soon
Nervous Neuron 2004-06-29 . chapter 2
I like this ^.^
The bummer of it all. The first time, and you're pregnant. Can't wait to find out more, so I'll stop reviewing and start reading ^.^
Mackenzie Lee Hawthorne 2004-06-05 . chapter 16
Oh no, this looks like bad news. He seems kinda scary. What happened to Jess? Well,good chapter, update soon. Sorry it took so long to review. Later, Mack
CaffineAnonymous 2004-06-03 . chapter 16
oh dear. please update soon!
under the influence 2004-06-02 . chapter 16
oh...the baby's father...
another good chappie!
under the influence 2004-06-02 . chapter 15
ack! another cliffhanger? wow...
good chapter nonetheless...by the way, who's Lisa again?
Mackenzie Lee Hawthorne 2004-06-01 . chapter 15
Uh-oh... this does not sound good. How far along was she? I can't remember, but isn't it too soon for her to actually be having the baby? No good... Good chapter, and I can't believe the speed with which you've been updating lately. It's crazy! You're my hero!
-Mack
CaffineAnonymous 2004-05-26 . chapter 14
*SO* cute! I love it!
Mackenzie Lee Hawthorne 2004-05-25 . chapter 14
Aww! It's just so... aw, how cute! I don't have anything else to say, other than that. It's just so darn cute, though! -Mack
under the influence 2004-05-24 . chapter 14
aw...how sweet...keep going...this is good
Mackenzie Lee Hawthorne 2004-05-24 . chapter 13
How nice! Gotta run but I just wanted to say that this was a brilliant idea, bringing another pregnant girl her age in. Genious! Anyway, gotta go. -Mack
under the influence 2004-05-24 . chapter 13
good chapter! can't wait to see what happens!
Anne Speare 2004-05-17 . chapter 1
I like your story. You're doing a good job. Keep on writing.
- Annie Jo
Mackenzie Lee Hawthorne 2004-05-17 . chapter 11
Well, this is a cumilative review for the last two chapters, and sorry they took me so long to read. Awesome stuff, you are such an excellent writer... Keep it up, God will use your talents (already is, actually). -Mack
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