But. . .but. . .*more!* You're not very nice, are you? Writing all this neat stuff and then not anymore. >_O Well, as with your others, I'd really like more of this one, too. Sigh. Well I really do hope you update again, although it seems you haven't in quite a while. I can hope. So I shall. I hope away. You really do have talent, as is evidenced by your beginnings of stories that I've read. I only hope that you stick with them and finish them all one day. (Of course I know what it's like to *not*. . .I have no right to preach. I know this. >_< Bah.)
I like Davian's name. It be nifty.

I don't have time to read the 3 chapt. but I really enjoy the other ones. I like how you are expressing his mind its written very well. It also gives a lot of information. And the little idea that he might be gay or bi (mb i just came up with that but thats what i got) is really cool.
Blondie

I think i read this abt 2-3 times (with the 1st two chapters) thinking that each time the next chapter would be up, LOL!
Seriously though, I am enjoying this story, but I keep forgetting to tell myself "its not real" ><

Keep up the good work Miz ^_^

gjgjgjgjgjgjjgjgjgjjgj what else can I say?! GJ! lol Keep writing! ^^

hey, pretty damn skippy. Yeah, it's Sarah btw...I said I'd review tomorrow but I lied XP lol. Yeah, it's good. MORE CHAPTERS! Lol.

Mizery Rose, love the story. Keep up the good work. I'm with you all the way. ~.^

ARGH UR SUCH A GOOD WRITER! >.o *is jealous* keep writing! ^-^ Can't wait for chappy 2!

Hi ^^

I cant wait for Ch 2!!
Its a well structured, interesting read, and definately got me warped!
I liked the coffee-splilling part and the ending was rounded off nicely.
Actually now, coming to think of it, ch 1 could have been a fraction longer, but overall its great and it sounds promising!!

I really think this is a good story cause well it is basically what happens now but whatever it is good so yeah.GOOD STORY!