 writergurlLW 2006-08-06 . chapter 1Great short poem. I wish I could write poetry as good as yourself. |
 Heather 2004-03-02 . chapter 1 Thsi is awesome! This is a really good poem. I can totally see why your teacher cried. I loved it! |
 kijochan 2003-06-17 . chapter 1Wow, this is nicely done. You capture the feeling very well. I could agree on the innocence part. It opened Americans to the little bits and pieces of truth, at least, the way I see it. As a result, the public is more aware of the world than ever before. I wish all that is dark would come to light soon, so that we could mend it and create a better future for each and everyone of us to live in. Anyway, good job. |
 Da Muff'n Man 2003-04-15 . chapter 1 I think America's innocence was firmly gon after WW2, at the latest. What I believe was lost that day was...Trust. Americans will never trust the world again. Let me see If I can show you what I mean through a quote:
"We gave peace a chance and it cost us 9/11"-pro war slogan |
 SILVA-eR 2003-04-15 . chapter 1It's...interesting... |
 saima 2003-04-13 . chapter 1 hate to break it to you, but america's innocence was broken way before that. it's a nice poem but yeah, i don't agree with most of the stuff you said. |
 surgeon 2003-04-13 . chapter 1 Wow this is a really good poem. I dont agree with anything you said, but even still I found it moving!! |