this was great, but there really isnt even enough for a good plot. You need to keep going.

di

LOL. Lord Sabrel is stupid. He got what he desereved. Great chapter! Can't wait to see what you write next! Keep up the good work!

Well? What happens?! I want to know!

hey bex um this story is not one of my favorites but it could get intersting, but remember its all in the eye of the beholder so ya give me some bakround i dont really know who the characters are but its cool smiles
elise