dan, that is amazing! i absoutley love it!hte only part htat got me confused was when her father came in...i dunno...i love it!
it makes me think like its somebody your wrgihting aobut somebody special
great job!

Beautiful poem. I really like it!

RNL

Aw, that's sad, but beautifully written. Take care.

*turns up downsides and reads it again* Ah. I see. Lurvly. :)