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| Katrina Forest 2003-07-30 ch 1,   | Very interesting, I hope you do decide to post the full story here later. This seemed to go a bit fast, I felt like I was getting a glipse at a much larger story. For a regular play, it would have helped to describe the scenery a bit more, but since this was for radio only, you seemed to cover your bases pretty well. I liked the ending a lot, and your characters as well. Keep writing! -Katrina |
| Silence-endlessecho 2003-04-15 ch 1, | I'm going to tell my sister about this play, so she can read it. Writing plays seems difficult. You did very well. Some of the sentence grammer was hard to understand, or maybe you meant that to be the way they talk. Other than that, very enjoyable. I liked it. Thanks for the read. Submit more. |