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ChaoxAngel
2003-04-30
ch 1,
abuseYou've used your techniques nicely, and it brings into light the coldness of the subject had experienced. Very well done.

~DW
obsidian katana
2003-04-29
ch 1,
abusenice poem! sadly depressing, angsty, filled with emotion. you're such a great writer! umm for your question, i don't know for sure, but i think limerick is a 5 line poem with rhyme scheme aabba and syllables 9-9-6-6-9 or something like that, and with some humor. sorry i haven't been online, i'm really busy with hw and studying this week and we still need to prepare for fellowship, and maybe that peer pressure poem... oh well. keep on writing!
Keep it 100
2003-04-19
ch 1,
abuseGreat emotion.


~Heart of the Sword
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