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| ChaoxAngel 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abuseYou've used your techniques nicely, and it brings into light the coldness of the subject had experienced. Very well done. ~DW |
| obsidian katana 2003-04-29 ch 1, | abusenice poem! sadly depressing, angsty, filled with emotion. you're such a great writer! umm for your question, i don't know for sure, but i think limerick is a 5 line poem with rhyme scheme aabba and syllables 9-9-6-6-9 or something like that, and with some humor. sorry i haven't been online, i'm really busy with hw and studying this week and we still need to prepare for fellowship, and maybe that peer pressure poem... oh well. keep on writing! |
| Keep it 100 2003-04-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat emotion. ~Heart of the Sword |