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Holy shit.

That was...

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Holy shit!

*coughSEQUELcough*

Omg, that is so awesome!! The line that sticks out the most...for some reason...is the whole "Dead Don" thing. I know it wasn't intended to be such an impact point, but the alliteration stuck out...perfect fic! ^_^

I'm dead serious. Make a sequel (is that spelled right this time?) and send it to me! Keep writing; I'll be watching for updates.

Absolutely one of the best horror stories I've ever read... Excellent work!

THAT WAS AWESOME!

Nice concept. Very nice. My only suggestions would be, spelling out the number. It looks neater. And to put the action of the money/rocks into sentences and not the little line thingies. Other than that, this is great.