Hey. That's a great piece, though I don't understand the phrase 'evening's thrust'. Or maybe its just me. I love all your work at FiresAndFlowers, especially the stories about Atlassa Redfern. If you could review my (crappy) work, I would love it. Yeah. I ramble.Cya

Lovely. Especially adored the last bit: "They coat my skin... And cannot tell which of us is alive."

Love the poetry. Especially end. :)And cannot tell which of us/Is alive

Takishia (tracing-tt)

nice poem real kol

...good job. It pretty good for one f your first poems. Um, some bits need to flow a bit more, but the imagery's awsome and it's a very nice poem. ^^
-A+B

Awesome. Almost disturbing in its intensity...

You should write more serious poetry. I'm serious. (Lame joke, I know. I couldn't help myself)

I know the feeling...you captured it very...poetically. Nice piece.

wow...i likes. 'tis definitely interesting. kinda spooky, too. but good! you should keep it up! not that poetry can generally be written on a whim, but if you can, go for it!!