Nice. Another chapter up.
It's pretty good. One thing though, the language that you use seems a little too modern, especially on the parts where Kat talks to herself. Also, the story moves a little fast. Otherwise it's really good. Keep crankin' out chapters. Cya.

this is great!!

A great, fun story which I hope you intend to continue. Your characters spring off the page and I like the way you let us enter into their private thoughts. Kat's a great character - fiesty, funny and a little bit bad. I'd like to learn more about powerful but flustered Sydney. Yes, I'd definitely love to read more.

Haha
i think the gods like him, so they're giving him somebody to make sure he doesn't do anything stupid

this story is very good

Still I have to say that you have an excellent dialoge. I especially love your character Kat because of her sharp thinking and excellent comebacks.
Please write more for me to review.
*bows*

LORD Syd-NEY?

Oh boy...

Wonderful chapter, as usaul you've got the greatest dialoge yet for these two characters. So please keep going!
*bows
Koshi-chan

Very nice chapter. I think the dialoge is great so please write some more!
*Bows*
Koshi-chan

Heeheehee. Evil kid. I love strange little kids like her.

Not that way.

I mean, they're my favorite kinds of characters.

Her thing about the 'shinies' reminded me of a character my brother made up, except she's scifi.

Syd's real fun, too. I like him.

And your characterizations of the guards were very entertaining. Anime-esque.

Like Slayers, almost. Slayers series have the worst morons for side characters. Hehehe. They're funny, though.

I love all of your dialogue. Expressive, unique, it really drives the story.

This story is very good. I hope you will write more soon

very good. I want more! continue writing it.

Whee, melikes! Syd kicks royal booty. Not much else to say, is there? ^_^