Creepy, but in a good way. I can just picture the little kid cowering alone somewhere... Great job.

oh my gosh! that was fabulous! you write such good poems! im jealous :p keep it up

I know this! My parents faught up until I was 9. They got a divorce when I was eight. And It was settled on my 9th birthday. My parents haven't spoken much sense then. If you've experienced this too, I'm sorry. Its a wonderful poem. It captures so many depths of emotion.


~Caleb~

and you say your poems are bad
*** slap*
that was really **' shibby

Ah...that was shibby. Very sad. Liked it much!

~WZB~

Wow. This is powerful. It's so sad, and I love it so much! Nice rhyme scheme, very nice poem.
Good job!