Neat! *Vainly wishes it was winter, even thought she wouldn't get snow anyway* I loved playing in the snow when I lived in N.Y. I just wish it snowed in A.Z

~ CoolBeans18s

This is so good...the descriptions are beutiful and thought provoking. It makes you want to be there in the woods. You have such a talent...

You've written several poems about dolphins, haven't you? Another interesting poem!

~ CoolBeans18s

I like it! The line 'A blue as deep as the black inky sea' sounds a little odd, but I know what you mean. Great job!

~ CoolBeans18s

Haha! This was funny! I liked the way you did the times. This was really neat!

~ CoolBeans18s

Oh, Neat! I think lycanthrope is cool! Great job!

~ CoolBeans18s

I love winter! Not that we have snow or anything in Arrizona... Wonderful job! I particulary enjoyed the 16th line.

~ CoolBeans18s

Another great one!

~ CoolBeans18s

Great! I like the way you're describing bird. Where I live in AZ there are hundreds of hawks and eagles. Very well written!

~ CoolBeans18s

P.S - Thankyou for reviewing my Titanic story! Thanks for the tips!

Wonderfully written! I like it! There is only one thing in this poem that could be improved. Maybe you could change the 'trots' in the 3rd line to 'lopes'? Trots makes it sound like your writting about a horse.

~ CoolBeans18s

Interesting...

~ CoolBeans18s

your mum is right, the first one deserves to be preserved. The second one is very good, and made me laugh thinking of all the double-meanings you could read into it.

This is really cute and well written, advanced for 5th grade. Well done.

- WoW! Simple yet very descriptive! I like it. Nice job. I really really like it. Simple os the poem, as the dolphin as a child. Kind and gentle both are, no fear lit inside. Simple. I like it! KEEP WRITING>


May if chance comes- if you want- could you r/r some of my poemz or stories.please?