At some points, seem really slow, at some points seem too fast. But I still love it! Super cute!

How indeed did I miss a treasure like this after so many years? Vivid characterizations, curious setting, unspoken, and seldom mentioned, secrets, backstories, problems. Indeed, this is a good piece of work. I dare to ask, despite the quite...advanced period of time that has passed between this chapter and today's date, but surely there is inspiration enough yet to further this work?

I'd be delighted to see just how Delos and Soren's relationship works out, and there are so many unspoken questions that need answering. Why did Raksha, if I understand that correctly, kill his parents? What set him off? Is Damien truly off the hook with his old 'friends' after that incident? And just how did the three of them meet and become friends?

Truly, in good conscience, how can you capture an audience such a tale as you have writ - and well written it is, another gem I treasure - only to leave us to the hounds of uncertainty? I ask you, nay, urge you to reconsider working on this - if only to get me to stop speaking like a Revolutionary writer - to complete this tale of interwoven complexities and leave naught unfinished, for the good of your readers everywhere.

I love this story thu far are you going to continue it Kiri

This fic is really interesting. I'm really intrigued by how this will turn out.

I pray for your swift return

Holy cabbage! This has to be one of the best slash fics I've ever read! Your characters are excellent, they're so deep and have such great angst. All the couples are so cute and I really hope that Damien and Thanatos get together soon! I wuv them! Yesh, this fic is wonderful. Update soon!

this is good, you have to update soon ^.^

Awesome. Love the hat ^.~

Great story!The story is really great, but you haven't updated in almost a year!Delos and Soren are so cute! And Raksha makes the story even more interesting...Thanatos and Damien are really cool...And I LOVE the story a lot!You should really have more reviews!Please, keep writing!I need to read the next chapter!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Wow, what a gem this story is. So glad I stumbled across it, even though I can't remember quite how I did. I want the manga of this, dammit. If I could draw, I may even consider it myself. If. Keep updating. Updating seems to be a dying art on fictonpress... Can't wait for this story to develop fully. So many threads to be tied. Await it with great anticipation. Well done.

Oh my god you have no idea how in love with this fic I am. Everything about it is so perfect and I only saw one spelling error (unlike mine...)! I love the characters and their names are so different and so wonderful. Delos and Soren's relationship is so sweet that I feel like I have to bursh my teeth to get the overload of fluff out of them. When Delos kissed Soren I was so giggly and surprised that I let out a shriek. I love it so much, it's on my favorite stories list. Keep up the terrific work!

I want a hat like that! Hey, I loved Raksha, by the way. Really well written bit of dialogue, showed us his personality wonderfully.

FINALLY
you update!
still loev the slash
and the way it is written with such detail
^_^

YAAY!
you're back!
i was afraid the story had died or something
Delos and Soren!
whee!
*laughs at Damien*

Hehehe... Wow, I really love this! It's gotta be one of the best stories I've read in a very long time. It's convotulated enough to be interesting, but not some cornball soap opera. And... Soren is just so adorable! I like Delos a lot too. And Thanatos. And Damien. Well, you know. The main cast.
*stuffs soren into a burlap bag*
Muahahaha! *runs off*
*is killed by Delos*
...oww...