I like it. I like the use of capitalization throughout the lines. It gives the poem a unique signiture that is your own.

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Meesas like this a lot!
Then again, that's not much coming from me cause I love anything thats supernatural.
Very well writen if you ask me though. Lots of descriptions.

This is really good...the demon seems terrifying as you read it...>winged one

very descriptive. wonderful imagery of the demon. A few rhythm problems, but it imagery is so strong in the poem that it's not so bad. good stuff

An awesome poem! I love it! XD